The Rain Outside by Omi Salaveaclouds mourning an unamed loss
pouring streaming down in sheets
running beneath the sorrow
matted hair and soaked
second skin clothes
lightning lightening my
journey toward dampened thoughts of you
a pursuit through an upside down sea of
dreams.
04/03/2002 Posted on 04/03/2002 Copyright © 2025 Omi Salavea
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Posted by Cathlyn Cartier on 08/31/03 at 07:31 PM Beautiful poem, rain can be a very poetically inspiring thing. Personally I'd like to see the line breaks changed slightly, but still a beautiful poem. |
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