The Rain Outside

by Omi Salavea

clouds mourning an unamed loss

pouring streaming down in sheets

running beneath the sorrow

matted hair and soaked

second skin clothes

lightning lightening my

journey toward dampened thoughts of you

a pursuit through an upside down sea of



Posted on 04/03/2002
Copyright © 2019 Omi Salavea

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Cathlyn Cartier on 08/31/03 at 07:31 PM

Beautiful poem, rain can be a very poetically inspiring thing. Personally I'd like to see the line breaks changed slightly, but still a beautiful poem.

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