|Posted by Ronald A Pavellas on 11/14/02 at 02:38 PM|
I liked it very much, but I feel that there could have been a few more lines between the last two. It seemed a rather abrupt ending, and the
"peak experience" of the hailstones needs to be let down with a few more descending lines before the end. But, I did enjoy it, and wouldn't comment at all if I didn't.