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My Son Prefers Poems that Rhyme

by Kristine Briese

He wants them to be funny
     and never, ever sad
And if they do not rhyme
     he thinks they're very bad.

He likes them to have animals
     the crazier the better
Like a polka-dotted albatross
     or a purple Irish setter.

He hopes that they're disgusting
     with oozing yellow goo
Or at least a little scary
     with a spirit shouting BOO!

I've tried and tried to tell him
     that free verse is okay
But he just laughs and tells me
     to hush and go away.

So here's a rhyming poem
     for Jordan to enjoy.
Now let me get back to business
     you silly, silly boy!

03/26/2002

Posted on 03/26/2002
Copyright © 2024 Kristine Briese

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Cathlyn Cartier on 11/17/02 at 05:26 PM

Very cute and charming, and so like a young child!

Posted by Rommel Cruz on 05/10/03 at 06:11 PM

ahahaha. reminds me of myself when i was lil. =)

Posted by Rachelle Howe on 09/29/04 at 06:47 AM

rita says that's great. i disagree with her. i think it's f*cking great.

Posted by Jersey D Gibson on 10/15/05 at 10:09 PM

I want a purple Irish setter!

yer pal

Jersey

Posted by JD Clay on 04/24/06 at 03:31 PM

There is a smile implanted on my face for this treasured piece. Ahh, the adventuresome innocence of a child. pe4ce...

Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 09/09/09 at 01:37 AM

Delightfully rhymed and humorous!

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