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Going under (unfinished)

by Vikki Owens

Baby,
I think Im going under,
underwater,
undercover,
underground,
whatever,
I could use a hand...

03/06/2002

Posted on 03/06/2002
Copyright © 2022 Vikki Owens

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Rusty C Arquette on 01/16/03 at 02:44 AM

This is direct..economy of word..strong image - It pulls you in..makes you want answers - RCat

Posted by Maryellen Lebeda-Parra on 04/24/03 at 01:43 AM

honestly ... i appreciate this as is

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