| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Adrian Calhoun on 10/18/02 at 05:44 AM Nice work Mr. Clay. I too am fascinated by and with clouds. Love the mood, and the imagery so vividly written. |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 06/25/03 at 04:28 PM Nice work on the freedom of the mind and how no reins can truly hold the dreamer... thanks for sharing. |
| Posted by Rommel Cruz on 05/16/04 at 02:49 PM *bump*, ouch. i thought clouds were supposed to be soft. =) |
| Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 08/27/07 at 01:52 PM Delightful world play and fantastic autobiographical moment... enlightening. |
| Posted by A. Paige White on 01/12/08 at 06:28 PM That invisibly cloudy horse with wings is taking me for a ride I'll never forget... Right into and over a rainbow. Into my favorites folder! |
| Posted by Maria Massarella on 05/26/08 at 09:32 AM oh! Lying in the tall grass, will ever remind me of distant sunfilled hill-tops, ocean scents, wondrous cloud games ... and yet swift as the astral wind I am taken to other cloud games where in my night I enchanted beheld a winged dragon reach for the moon and kiss it. Though I know there is more to your poem than observing games in the sky, today Maestro I shall linger and land in that space where fantasy meets reality and be the dream. Grazie*m.a |
| Posted by Joan Serratelli on 03/12/09 at 01:41 PM AsVery enjoyable read wonderful write! a child, I loved to play "cloud games (I still do..shh....) |
| Posted by George Hoerner on 07/31/10 at 06:56 PM A great write JD. |
