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Dawn

by Julie Adams

you are creativity
in first bloom
lush, lean, moist,

in the glittering dew
of your sacred hour
petals swoon

one ray at a time
your radiance appears
flushed in a meadow
of poppies

dawn has nothing on you

01/05/2002

Posted on 01/05/2002
Copyright © 2024 Julie Adams

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Tom Goss on 03/27/06 at 05:22 PM

A sparse, sparkling tribute, like morning sun it draws visceral stretches from spring flowers.

Posted by Michael Smith on 01/23/10 at 10:40 PM

This was on someone's favorites list, apparently, and it is much deserved to be there. Whoever is on the receiving end of your beautiful tributes is a very lucky person indeed. Thanks!

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