Brief is Beautiful by Ronald A PavellasIt is probably self-serving To say so, but I cannot resist: Long poems lose me.
My eye is drawn to: The pithy, the direct; The illuminating, as in A small spotlight drawing One's attention to an interesting object.
The complex, the meandering, The maudlin, the windily self-centered Glaze my eyes and Cast my attention elsewhere.
So, forgive me, excellent fellow poets, For my inattention to the longer phrase, The convoluted concoction, Clever as some manifestly are.
I crave the simple exposition on: A thought A feeling An insight A revelation!
And now ... I'm about to exceed my own attention span...
11/02/1997 Posted on 01/03/2002 Copyright © 2025 Ronald A Pavellas
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Posted by Cathlyn Cartier on 11/16/02 at 12:56 AM My attention span isn't much longer than yours I guess... I feel terrible when I see a title that is so promising, and then open the poem and see it's more than what will fit on my screen, by a LONG way... I feel like I'm such a heel... |
Posted by Quinlan L Gibson on 05/30/03 at 05:15 PM This is..may I say..kickass. i completely agree, love the simplicity.. |
Posted by Lori Blair on 11/29/11 at 11:35 PM love the rhythm to this piece. Most exceptional! |
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