Damn You by Quinlan L GibsonFor making me fall in love with you first. Leaving me to hold my breath Until it pulls you under and drowns you in it too. For inserting feelings into my secure heart. Blindsiding me with what I knew in a second what that enigma called love. For the unwanted knowledge I now carry on the tip of my mountain of fears that if this ends it will crush me Fault be mine or not. For raising the curtain on my naked stage that has waited to host my future in acts. Damn you, for focusing the blurry reasons I've been waiting for "you". And the satisfaction of why it will be worth it. 12/04/2001 Posted on 09/20/2002 Copyright © 2024 Quinlan L Gibson
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Posted by Melanie A Bennett on 10/28/02 at 04:38 PM I can completely relate to this poem. It is excellent! Keep up the good work! |
Posted by Rhodora M Fitzgerald on 03/27/03 at 12:24 PM "For raising the curtain on my naked stage".... great line!
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Posted by Traci Mabats on 04/24/03 at 02:23 PM I can relate to this poem in more ways than one! (But perhaps Ill explain the details in private)This was great. |
Posted by Maryellen Lebeda-Parra on 09/10/03 at 05:23 PM many amazing lines. so much i love about it ...wish i could be more profound ... |
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