| Posted by Richard Paez on 12/09/02 at 07:19 PM Beth! Wow! Awesome! God, this reminds me so much of Tool's Eulogy (which, coming from me, is a compliment and a half!)... Every line in this is perfectly crafted, Beth. There isn't a single word out of place, not a single image that shouldn't be here, not a single one that isn't yet should. If every poem I wrote was as well controlled, as specifically tuned, as self contained yet oh, so universal, I'd bathe in butter every day. Thank you for sharing this! |
