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Finale (haiku)

by Bruce W Niedt


Summer’s last cricket --
chilled air, slow, unanswered chirps,
mainspring unwinding.


[First published in the online mag Short Stuff (Haiku Hut), September 2002]

10/19/2001

Posted on 10/19/2001
Copyright © 2025 Bruce W Niedt

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Agnes Eva on 04/26/03 at 04:43 AM

stunning! i love that leading line, gave such personality to the little guy. would make a great children's story; "Summer's Last Cricket"

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