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Eden (haiku)

by David R Spellman

gnarled, knotted branches
spring blossoms hide, promising
sweet, juicy pleasures


Posted on 10/12/2001
Copyright © 2024 David R Spellman

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Richard Paez on 11/03/02 at 08:43 PM

Excellent Haiku, David! I love the transition of images in this piece- from gnarled to pleasures a deliciously sweet fruit with just enough of a hint of sour tartness. Thank you for sharing this!

Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 05/07/04 at 02:04 PM

Wonderful picture! Great haiku!

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