September 11 Poems: The Birds Are on Fire by Bruce W Niedt
This morning in school we hear the big boom,
and Teacher tells us get our things and lets go,
cause theres a fire.
When I walk down the street with the other kids
I turn around. The birds are on fire,
I tell Teacher, but she says, dont look back,
just keep walking. But I turn around again.
The tall building has smoke coming out,
like when I draw a chimney in art class.
I see angels holding hands, dancing through the air.
Then a big orange ball comes out of the other building
like a flower in a tall vase, and I hear another big boom.
I know its a fire.
Papers are flying down all around like butterflies.
I think they were somebodys homework.
Some funny gray snow is falling,
and a bad smell hurts my nose.
Gray people are running and screaming and crying,
like they lost their mommy or daddy,
or somebody bad scared them.
Some of them are bleeding.
I see lots of fire trucks coming up the street.
Their sirens are real loud. I like fire trucks.
When I get home, Mama gives me a big hug.
She is watching a show on TV
about airplanes flying into the buildings.
When they fall down, they look like
my sand castles on the beach,
when the ocean comes and knocks them down.
I say to Mama, did the pilots make a mistake?
Mama just shakes her head.
She says, lots of people died today.
I say, doesnt Aunt Maria work
in one of those buildings?
And Mama starts to cry.
Its okay, I say. Im sure shes all right.
Maybe she just got lost.
At night I ask God
to please find my Aunt Maria,
and help all the dead people get to Heaven.
I ask God to make all the birds and angels that fell
go back to the sky,
and to put all the bad fires out.
10/07/2001 Posted on 10/07/2001 Copyright © 2024 Bruce W Niedt
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 10/23/03 at 05:08 PM The innocence in this captures the events well. It reminds me though, of when my dad came home and told me what he saw in a childlike manner, and I took the role of "mama", comforting hi, |
Posted by Meghan Helmich on 07/09/08 at 04:44 PM this is just breathtaking. it's so paradoxical. it's supposed to be written by a child but a child could never say it this innocently and detailed at the same time. does that make sense? |
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