Love and War by Jon-Jacob F DealWhatever philosopher quoted so often As saying that all is fair in love and war Could be the most foolish sage I have heard tell of Else war between lovers he ne'er saw before
The diff'rence between us, my willful young lady, Is I subscribe not to that theory of fools However, it seems that your reckless abandon Accommodates vi'lence unfettered by rules
For carnage irrep'rable spawns from such conflict When words become weapons, as solid as stone; Though much may be said in the clutches of passion The wise realize what is best left alone
So, I remain chivalrous even in battle Conducting myself as an honoréd knight For I cover you with the shield in my left hand Though all that you see is the sword in my right
I shall never strike you when you are not ready Nor shall I attack you when you come apart Yet you, in your feral ferocity, hasten To fletch words as arrows direct to my heart
Like barbéd darts through the air soaring toward me A volley to darken the brightness of day The diff'rence between us, my willful young lady: I love you enough to know what not to say. 09/28/2001
Posted on 09/28/2001 Copyright © 2024 Jon-Jacob F Deal
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