poem for whoever by Paul Little
Poem for (insert name here)
The night/day was describe day/night
And (yet) the air was tinged with magic
But even seers and prophets
Could not have foretold
Of the beauty I would behold.
When I first looked into your insert colour here eyes
Those precious windows to your soul
I stared at them for almost an eternity
Comparing them to relative gemstone.
Then I noticed your insert colour here hair
Like use relevant comparison here
E.g. Like rays of golden sun streaming from the heavens
That complimented your eyes so well.
Then I beheld your face fully for the first time
Held captive by your gaze
And make comment regarding key feature
E.g. And your radiant (or ever present) smile
And I knew I was in love.
And when we are together
My life is somehow complete.
Insert personal cliché here.
(Tip: - rip off song lyrics or some other poet)
09/20/2001 Posted on 09/20/2001 Copyright © 2025 Paul Little
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Amy Niggel on 11/08/02 at 03:54 AM I like this very honest as to how we often fall into the trap of cookie cutter poetry or thought for that matter!! :) |
Posted by Ulyss Rubey on 11/15/05 at 01:23 AM LOL! thanks for the chuckle. |
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