| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 10/24/07 at 01:42 PM ...maaaaria! you did it again!...as i read this tight piece i read it like a slam-poetry kind of thing...but all slam poetry itsn't about kicking the white man's arse, anymore[in the past couple of years]it's become as expressive as one's love to [a] her...so as i re-read it i paused in between the spaced words and wowwweee, it really walks, melady [take a bow] |
| Posted by Alison McKenzie on 10/28/07 at 08:46 PM I feel the whisper of this. It curves like a beautiful sea-horse and makes me feel the gentle ocean tide urging the journey. I feel the embrace of this, the peace of this, the love in this, the sensuous touch of breath's breezes. So much beauty, Maria. |