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postcard

by Ava Blu


02/20/2010

Posted on 02/20/2010
Copyright © 2026 Ava Blu

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Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 02/21/10 at 12:10 AM

What I love the most about this is the narrative tone of it. Much of the piece reads like a freewheeling, free forming short story that's coming straight (of course) from the mouth of madness. There's so much wonderful, beautiful, strange and heartbreaking weirdness going on here. As far as whirlwind journeys through the imagery goes this may well be one of your best. There's a lot going on, but it all comes together flawlessly in the end.

Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 04/28/10 at 03:17 PM

how powerful a postcard can be. i love the idea of the chance meeting with the postcard and who it was meant for. it feels like a big 'F you' and it feels like they deserve it.

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