I thought the new one was quite good. It certainly didn't feel like gibberish, or something that was lacking in meaning. That's just me though.

I thought the new one was quite good. It certainly didn't feel like gibberish, or something that was lacking in meaning. That's just me though.

Try random word exercises with just the purpose to pull out some lines. Don't worry about editing or posting. Maybe that will open a door. :)

Try random word exercises with just the purpose to pull out some lines. Don't worry about editing or posting. Maybe that will open a door. :)

i don't know whether this will be at all helpful, but. sometimes when i haven't written for ages, i put myself in a situation in which i would often find myself writing and give myself space to write, if that makes sense. for example, i often find myself moved to write when i sit in a pub watching what's going on around me, so i'll go to a pub and just sit. i hope find a way to unblock yourself soon. i think the key is to allow it to happen. :)