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the ones i love
07/06/2007 12:18 a.m.

the ones I love aren’t very far – furled in scarves & sipping wine
laughing shoulders (and how they laugh)
at anyone who isn’t fine, the ones I love
have treated nails and low-down eyes, aren’t far enough,
love to describe the steak and kidney pie they ate on a winter’s day
under the oaks – amid a suicidal rain of leaves –
our tongues do not behave tonight, tasting
blasphemy and prayer and floury soup, indite, the ones I love
unfolding from their unit doors in jogging gear



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Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 08/01/07 at 07:16 AM

This reveals an insider's view -- almost a song or litany-- feeling atmosphere of gleeful affectionate observance of "the ones" about you, and the unfolding at the end-- out the door, at the anticipation of a run...

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