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Unseen , Unknown

by Keith D Allison



Mirrored image of the bone
within the mountain's breast - the lily deep within the snow
all I have loved - I have loved alone

Copyrighted 2000

11/07/2011

Posted on 11/07/2011
Copyright © 2022 Keith D Allison

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Linda Fuller on 11/08/11 at 12:30 AM

This is quite beautiful...and achingly sad.

Posted by Jody Pratt on 11/08/11 at 02:03 AM

The very last line changes the dynamic of everything said before it. Forces a reread and creates a new emotional tie to the poem. Nice choice of words.

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