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Unseen , Unknown
by Keith D Allison
Mirrored image of the bone
within the mountain's breast - the lily deep within the snow
all I have loved - I have loved alone
Copyrighted 2000
11/07/2011 Posted on 11/07/2011
Copyright © 2024 Keith D Allison
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Linda Fuller on 11/08/11 at 12:30 AM This is quite beautiful...and achingly sad. |
| Posted by Jody Pratt on 11/08/11 at 02:03 AM The very last line changes the dynamic of everything said before it. Forces a reread and creates a new emotional tie to the poem. Nice choice of words. |
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