Unseen , Unknown
by Keith D Allison
Mirrored image of the bone
within the mountain's breast - the lily deep within the snow
all I have loved - I have loved alone
Posted on 11/07/2011
Copyright © 2022 Keith D Allison
|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Linda Fuller on 11/08/11 at 12:30 AM|
This is quite beautiful...and achingly sad.
|Posted by Jody Pratt on 11/08/11 at 02:03 AM|
The very last line changes the dynamic of everything said before it. Forces a reread and creates a new emotional tie to the poem. Nice choice of words.