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impermanence
by Jim Benz
on a beach
of receding tides
sorrow
draws its line
so gracefully
12/01/2010 Posted on 12/01/2010
Copyright © 2024 Jim Benz
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| Posted by Paul Lastovica on 12/01/10 at 09:48 PM http://www.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid=10150309084010567&set=a.10150309082275567.567594.540750566 - i love all the lines a receeding wave creates... |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 12/01/10 at 11:32 PM Brings to mind a barely visible brush painting this, no beginning, no end.... Lovely. Thank you. |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 12/19/10 at 01:18 AM Oh wow. This is so evocative. I found it through Paul Lastovica's journal - http://pathetic.org/journal.php?i_memberid=6297 - where he posted a photo as a bow to you and this poem. Now I can't read your poem without also seeing that photo. So much to think about in this little gem - the graceful line drawn by sorrow. Thanks for a beautiful poem and for a good meditation topic, Jim. |
| Posted by A. Reed on 02/21/11 at 07:46 PM Now that's being easy...and I mean saying so much...nice. |
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