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Some Say

by Keith D Allison

Life is hard
some see
the glass half empty
they worry
all nigth long
as the world slips way

No morning sun
my hands
they are cold

But I had a bowl
of porride
this morning
I'm lucky
some say

10/19/2010

Posted on 10/19/2010
Copyright © 2022 Keith D Allison

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by George Hoerner on 10/19/10 at 01:37 PM

Those with much too often see how little they have while those with little often fail to see how much they have. The measures may be different but in the end it is all the same. Good write.

Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 10/19/10 at 07:07 PM

Love that ending. Very, very clever stuff, man.

Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 10/31/10 at 02:44 AM

It's not just the little thing that count, it's the simple, too. And "porridge" is much cozzier that oatmeal...ack! Nice write. Thanks.

Posted by Lori Blair on 11/28/11 at 02:45 AM

and then there are some that might say lucky is as lucky does..great write Keith! thank you!

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