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A Valentine Date

by Angela Nuzzo

Eros shot me in the butt.
I thought it was a pimple,
so I rubbed my sore behind
'til I noticed my date's dimple.

He just smiled and glanced away,
until I burst out laughing.
He looked back and chuckled too,
which made it all more baffling.

How could I fall in love so fast?
It couldn't be that simple!
But 20 years have come to pass
and we still smile about that "pimple."


Posted on 02/08/2010
Copyright © 2023 Angela Nuzzo

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 02/13/10 at 04:18 PM

Congratulations, Angela, on the fine win in the Valentine's contest.

Posted by Michael Smith on 02/13/10 at 11:06 PM

Absolutely! Congratulations on topping the contest -- it was very much deserved! :)

Posted by Jennifer Ragan on 02/14/10 at 05:28 AM

Congratulations on your heavenly write!

Posted by Dave Fitzgerald on 02/14/10 at 05:37 PM

Brought a big smile to my face Angela. Well Done :)

Posted by Maria Massarella on 02/14/10 at 08:24 PM

Happy to see this shining in POTD skies on your birthday, Angela! and Congratulations on being the Valentine's Heaven Winner.

Posted by Amie Golda on 02/15/10 at 02:40 AM

Valentines heaven indeed...a sweet write. Congratulations on the win!

Posted by Clara Mae Gregory on 02/16/10 at 02:39 AM

Cute as can be....and the rhythm and rhyme are wonderful!

Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 01/31/11 at 02:01 AM

A lot of romance in a very funny poem!

Posted by Jody Pratt on 11/08/11 at 03:12 AM

Much more playful then that dark piece I just read. :) This piece holds a piece of you within it, nice job.

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