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by Adrian Foster

waxing moon
a starry night
skin-breaking chill
forego the pain I will

broken core
bled feelings of remorse
incantation read
see this shattered work
of yore

black leather ribbons intertwined
around a picture of one
beneath these clouds
this white sun
events of dismay refined

arise new day
hardened veins of soul
default of this new role
this is the way

02/03/2010

Author's Note: For ~A~

Posted on 02/03/2010
Copyright © 2020 Adrian Foster

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Joe Cramer on 02/04/10 at 03:53 PM

well done... welcome to Pathetic!

Posted by V. Blake on 02/05/10 at 12:14 AM

"forego the pain I will" -- That you, Yoda? ;) Welcome to Pathetic, Adrian!

Posted by William Brunk on 02/05/10 at 11:40 PM

nice work adrian!! welcome on in. ;)

Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 07/23/10 at 03:50 PM

I don't know how long it took to weave this ode but the time whether long or short was worth it as you've arrived at lovely rhythms and sounds.

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