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wordless commune

by Maria Massarella

looking in to the diary page
from a brazen title view
i found your pebble-note

turbulence plunged to eye

soundless waves surface
break at patients latitudes
windwhispers meander the

shores of wordless commune






moondancer*m.a

06/24/2009

Author's Note: on reading "excerpt from a cancer patient's diary" by Oona Mamahda

...having experienced my own moments of such empty pages...

Posted on 06/24/2009
Copyright © 2024 Maria Massarella

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Kate Demeree on 06/25/09 at 03:07 PM

*Grateful Hug*.... for the amazing woman and soul that you are Maria... Thank you for posting your heart openly upon the page!

Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 06/26/09 at 03:35 PM

Wonderful use of imagery flowing seamlessly from diary page to waves along a "wordless" shore.

Posted by Glenn Currier on 06/26/09 at 05:39 PM

What a miracle poetry can be - using words to transport us into wordless commune. Beautiful poem. I salute your gift of words and bow to your humanity.

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