| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Alisa Js on 03/18/09 at 01:44 AM Hello Maria, What a glorious description of the heavenly skies above.... thank you for sharing with us your vision. alisa ;-D |
| Posted by Joan Serratelli on 03/18/09 at 12:49 PM Onece again, your visions are clear. You described the sky so vividly that iI can almost see it. Beautiful piece, as usual! |
| Posted by Laurie Blum on 03/18/09 at 04:46 PM The coupled words work wonderfully in this piece. Vivid! I wish Spring was here already too! |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 03/22/09 at 12:34 PM Ahhhh you picture the changing of the seasons with great grace and charm. |
| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 03/22/09 at 03:56 PM roam me |
| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 03/22/09 at 04:02 PM roam me
Beautiful way to think. I can imagine this as a request to a love.
As I am under my Oak (where else am I ever, right Maria?) the wind is rustling the leaves and the finches I tell you about are finding clothespin bags to fluff into a fresh new home. Quiet, I remain captivated. Gleefully so. Your poem stirs the morningness of everything. |
| Posted by Laura Doom on 03/22/09 at 07:03 PM You illustrate how the seasons sustain poetry Maria :) Being something of a winter fetishist, I tend to overlook the greys; spring, another wondrous colour in the ebb and flow of nature's palette. |
| Posted by Sandy M. Humphrey on 03/23/09 at 06:54 PM I love your images. smh |
| Posted by A. Paige White on 03/25/09 at 05:59 PM "robes anew the branches" is such a lovely expression of new growth. Would that all our branches anew the robes of spring. Beautiful. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 03/26/09 at 03:27 PM This feels like a painting in transition from autumnwinter to spring. I love this effect. |
| Posted by Scott Utley on 03/26/09 at 07:07 PM Innocentia eloquentia |
| Posted by Ken Harnisch on 03/27/09 at 06:31 PM Marzo..a month and a name close to me and mine...all rendered beautifully under your hand, Maria, but what else is new? |
| Posted by Tony Young on 03/28/09 at 06:11 PM So lovely and fresh your journey into spring. |
