| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Joe Cramer on 03/05/09 at 02:10 AM ... exquisite word choice.... so much more to be said here..... |
| Posted by Sandy M. Humphrey on 03/05/09 at 05:24 AM There is such sorrow in these very vivid lines. smh |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 03/05/09 at 03:30 PM ...smh, is correct-0...a short treatise on [the]life-death drama, well written, colleen. |
| Posted by JJ Johnson on 03/06/09 at 07:34 AM The imagery is vivid and dark. This a actually kinda scary. It reminds me of when I was a very young boy, hiding in the closet behind the garment bags of my mother's dresses and old clothes. JJ |
| Posted by Joan Serratelli on 03/09/09 at 04:39 PM Sad poem- very haunting and dark. Well written- good read |
| Posted by Jasmine Sword-Mann on 07/02/10 at 02:12 PM There are no words to properly express the emotions I feel in this piece. It sincerely moved me. |
| Posted by Steve Baba on 06/25/11 at 11:48 PM Wow. Excellent write Colleen. |
| Posted by Laurie Blum on 07/13/11 at 01:01 PM This is a wonderful piece of writing Colleen! |
| Posted by Ken Harnisch on 07/15/11 at 08:01 PM I am in silent awe..and can say nothing else |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 06/18/14 at 12:38 AM a soulful feast to say the least. |
