| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Julie Adams on 02/05/09 at 04:40 AM I love how this poem, in all it's radiance, first expounds into a rainbow of word colors that melt into one another, and then gently puckers towards a sweet kiss, like the treasure at the end of a rainbow, what an ending...the form is divine, peace, jewels |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 02/05/09 at 11:12 PM Very,very nice Maria....CharMin. |
| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 02/06/09 at 01:20 AM *m.a
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| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 02/06/09 at 01:22 AM Your poetry has the lovely sense of handwritten calligraphy. |
| Posted by Anita Mac on 02/06/09 at 04:04 AM The mere shape of this is enchanting, but I particularly like 'lightsingtouch'... What a lovely thought... ;o) |
| Posted by Sandy M. Humphrey on 02/06/09 at 03:55 PM eyes flutter and spark while reading this and I can't help but lick moist my lips in anticpation of my next kiss..this is bliss...you are an artist. smh |
| Posted by JD Clay on 02/06/09 at 11:11 PM Your eloquence is far and beyond subime, Maria. Pleasing to the senses all six. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 02/07/09 at 03:48 PM Breathtaking - something in which to lose oneself. Thank you. |
| Posted by Tony Whitaker on 02/08/09 at 07:46 AM Visually and poetically beautiful. |
