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when the night undances
by Maria Massarellawith a sworded flash
anticipates glimpses
dissipates nascent hope
leaves no choice other
than come to you naked
of fears and illusions
*m.a 01/03/2009 Author's Note: * embraces the new year
sidenotes: hoping it will be gentle with my beloved ones and all who have more challenges on their horizon
though i must admit i adore what Kathleen has seen in my words
Posted on 01/03/2009
Copyright © 2024 Maria Massarella
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 01/03/09 at 04:03 AM Here the playful night undresses with its dance. The love induces such a trance that those two veils are dropped- fear and illusion only the true and lover would prefer to cut through these... to bliss. Beautifully invoked, this new year's embrace. |
| Posted by Joe Cramer on 01/04/09 at 02:16 AM I loved this!!! |
| Posted by Colleen Sperry on 01/04/09 at 06:04 AM Happy New Year |
| Posted by Laurie Blum on 01/05/09 at 02:08 AM Bellisima! Your words sing Maria. |
| Posted by Tony Whitaker on 01/05/09 at 01:32 PM Thank you Maria for this wonderful "dance of the veils". |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 01/07/09 at 01:04 AM Ringing in the new year without malice or undue optimism! |
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