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in the yes
by Maria Massarellahad i looked into your eyes
i could say it is in their
light your magnetism
though your eyes
i have never seen
their light is known to me
in the eyes of dreams
*m.a
01/03/2009 Posted on 01/02/2009
Copyright © 2024 Maria Massarella
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 01/03/09 at 04:00 AM I love the play on eyes in yes, so subtle and dreamlike, yes. I know this feeling and so beautifully I even dreamed my daughter saw such eyes and saw her beaming the other night, happier than I have ever seen. You evoke this beautiful bliss of knowing eyes of of dream. |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 01/04/09 at 01:14 AM Subtlety is the word for this dreamlike poem. The eyes (yes) have it! |
| Posted by Alisa Js on 01/04/09 at 06:40 AM Happy New Year, my friend... I loved this one. You are truly a gifted songstress with words. There is a melody I hear each time I read this. alisa ;-0 |
| Posted by Scott Utley on 01/09/09 at 01:05 PM I stop ... everything is still for a moment ... and then that other reality startles back into slow motion. It is always that way when I read you. |
| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 01/13/09 at 01:29 PM There are no boundaries to you or your creativity, angelina. I love your softness and courage and the way you slide in lovely surprises in your writing. *J |
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