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moonlight mistress

by Olivia Weinkein

she was beautiful and wise
you could see it in her eyes
as she dressed for the night
expecting nothing in return.

08/21/2008

Posted on 08/21/2008
Copyright © 2024 Olivia Weinkein

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Charlie Morgan on 08/22/08 at 02:33 AM

...oky doky, this is so tight i hate to keep reading this because i'm afraid i'll unravel it...this is so honest on so many levels, a choppy sea ride of truth, and it is a society the bears [down] on us to 'only feel important/worthwhile if a [certain] someone is part of our life...i am still applauding and whispering to those around me: "Right On! lady, Right On!...

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 08/23/08 at 05:07 PM

I like this straight, possibly sad tale - really leaves a lot for the reader to fill in - nice job.

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