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life is...

by Sigurdur Haraldsson

like a hamster
running around in circles
endlessly

12/21/2007

Posted on 12/21/2007
Copyright © 2021 Sigurdur Haraldsson

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Joe Cramer on 12/21/07 at 05:50 PM

Outstanding!

Posted by Tony Whitaker on 12/22/07 at 08:25 AM

A wonderful Haiku that steps out of the typical 5-7-5 format! Excellent!

Posted by Rowan Luis on 02/16/08 at 01:49 PM

yes. over and over and over again. there's something about ending on the word 'endlessly' that's just brilliant

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