life is... by Sigurdur Haraldssonlike a hamster
running around in circles
endlessly 12/21/2007 Posted on 12/21/2007 Copyright © 2024 Sigurdur Haraldsson
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Joe Cramer on 12/21/07 at 05:50 PM Outstanding! |
Posted by Tony Whitaker on 12/22/07 at 08:25 AM A wonderful Haiku that steps out of the typical 5-7-5 format! Excellent! |
Posted by Rowan Luis on 02/16/08 at 01:49 PM yes. over and over and over again. there's something about ending on the word 'endlessly' that's just brilliant |
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