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by Anastasia Shows

She sat
pondering things
that she once fancied
over a cup of cappucino.
but neglected them
as she enjoyed
the warmth
of the ultra violet rays
which focused
on the freckles
of her left cheek.

12/04/2007

Posted on 12/05/2007
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Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by CM Bauer on 12/05/07 at 05:05 AM

I enjoy your work, welcome to the community :)

Posted by Alison McKenzie on 12/05/07 at 10:01 AM

A stark snapshot into just a moment of the experience, the sad reality of the radiation vs. common thoughts to keep her occupied. You have a way with a moment...

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 11/17/12 at 02:54 PM

It gives me two still life moments of great contrast. "She sat" packs a punch. Thanks for this.

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 11/17/12 at 02:55 PM

and Congrats on POTD!

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