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at least he thinks i'm pretty

by Lauren Singer

you, in a mild stupor

unfamiliar,

moved closer.

in a voice i'd never heard,
or in a way i hadn't seen you speak

said
"sometimes i just want to
wreck your

pretty,
little,
face."

and then we went downstairs,
you said we'd talk later.

we didn't.

now i can only muse
over vague explanation.

02/15/2007

Posted on 02/15/2007
Copyright © 2024 Lauren Singer

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Anne Boulender on 02/15/07 at 08:26 AM

how very multi dimensional (that you didn't talk later). don't know if you intended that, but take it as a compliment. the wreck your pretty little face is sort of hot in a way.

Posted by Genevieve Sturrock on 02/15/07 at 02:06 PM

don't agree with it being 'hot'...it scared me. i'd go running for the hills, sweetie!

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 02/15/07 at 03:39 PM

Creeps me ...

Posted by Timothy Somers on 02/16/07 at 12:07 AM

Ballad. Stetch it and set it to music.

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