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a lesson on transcendental meditation
by Jared Fladelandif I could make a poem
as creative as can be.
but with a spark of emotional honesty.
Then I would be a success.
as creative as can be.
but with a spark of emotional honesty.
if I could make a poem
Then I would be a success. 08/26/2006 Posted on 08/26/2006
Copyright © 2024 Jared Fladeland
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 08/26/06 at 08:14 PM Something I think most poets strive for Jared. Well stated! :o) |
| Posted by Angela Nuzzo on 08/27/06 at 04:43 AM Beautifully spoken...in just four lines. :) |
| Posted by Mara Meade on 09/02/06 at 03:33 AM The circular patterns in this made me dizzy. In other words, PERFECT! ;]
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