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Tempted-To-Touch

by Kristi Paik

Damn you and your
Beautiful big doe eyes
Sweet southern voice
and those
Candy kissable lips

I am eve
and you are somehow
The apple
and Adam
(and the snake hissing into my ear)
All intertwined
into a stunning creature

you tell me lies
and i love it
but hate you for it

i begin to question what matters most and

i remind myself
That everyone
looks good
in Candlelight

05/16/2006

Author's Note: Temptation...it's a bitch :)

Posted on 05/16/2006
Copyright © 2024 Kristi Paik

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Christina Bruno on 05/16/06 at 04:30 AM

i love this poem, it is simple and real...it flows perfectly and i like your images -

Posted by Joan Serratelli on 05/16/06 at 10:30 AM

Great poem- wonderful description...and oh, so true. Excellent job!

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