boundless bright sky day fromabuswindow by Paul Marino
BOUNDLESS
a larger
woman
stuffed
in
the
back
vomits
and
the
bus
u-
turns
i
ve
got
to piss
the
driver
grieves
a
rest
stop
carries
its
beat
with pork
rinds
and
hamburger
BRIGHT
off
the bus the
air
swirls
its about
to
rain
so i get under
the closest
overhang
and stare
at my
shoes
SKY
the
mop
and bucket
are
brought
onto the
bus
as we
stretch
under
the
seamless
sky
i sit
on the
curb
like
a cherry
on
a
sundae
DAY
i dream inside
and eat
my
crackers
as my
back
breaks
and
an old
black
man
huddles
whisky
his
wife
holds his
cane
by
her worn
slippers
FROM
the
seats are
red
and
blue
i
listen
to
my walkman
my
favorite
songs
ive
run
away from
home
A
its the
twenty-
first
hour
and the sky
darkens
the aisle fills
with
a
sleepy
moon
light
glow
as a young girl
falls
asleep
on
my
shoulder
earl-
ier
she told me
that she lives with
her
grandmother
near Raleigh
and feels
like
runnin
away
BUS
in
Lake-
land
birds
chirp the
corner leaks
into
a sewer
feet
stamp
and
shake the
bus
the man
workin at the station loads
our luggage
WINDOW
the bright morning
in Floridas
open land
my new friend
wakes up
and
after an hours sleep
we stay up
for the city
11/30/2004 Author's Note: time trap is my running away song.
Posted on 11/30/2004 Copyright © 2024 Paul Marino
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Melanie J Yarbrough on 04/04/05 at 05:55 AM took me long enough to figure out it was the title in caps..lovely images throughout- love the "like a cherry on a sundae" line. and the cuts in the lines make me feel like I'm on a bus, moving bumping, swaying. "stay up for the city" so nice. |
Posted by Melanie J Yarbrough on 04/16/05 at 03:07 AM I suppose I should have picked one I haven't commented on-- but I just couldn't. Gabe, I absolutely love this poem- it stupefies me. There is nothing I would change about it and I've read it so many times, I've lost count. Simply stunning. (did I make it? #100, I mean..) |
Posted by Melanie J Yarbrough on 09/01/05 at 03:36 AM ..still love it |
Posted by Frankie Sanchez on 04/21/06 at 01:11 PM this is superb. why have i never read it before this morning? nice work here... |
Posted by Shonda Creemer on 09/09/06 at 04:40 AM I was blown away with every word/sound/movement. You are a consummate artist. "A" was my favorite piece by far, but I loved all of it. +fav |
Posted by Cristy M. on 12/11/06 at 02:42 AM it's a sad thing to waltz around your digs and see ditties that i had loved before and loved aloud so that everyone could hear how good i thought they were, yet see none of my old comments on them. if i'm not mistaken, this is the one i commented with one word: wicked. it's too much of a temptation to go through the entire process again since you know exactly how i feel about each one of them. it's like a familiar walk through a familiar city street but the house you used to live in was remodeled and sold to someone else. it's odd. anyway, i still heart your jazz--this one among the others. they're pretty flipping wicked. |
Posted by Matthew Sharp on 01/13/07 at 06:17 AM are you under the influence of gas station food?
twinkies last really longer than me.
awesome! |
Posted by Frank Lee on 09/05/07 at 12:10 AM weird....time trap is an awesome running away song..been there... |
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