| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Anne Engelen on 09/07/04 at 02:23 PM excellent read! |
| Posted by Mara Meade on 09/07/04 at 10:44 PM Very appropriate for the times, and so well said. |
| Posted by Mary Ellen Smith on 09/08/04 at 09:56 AM Yes...not too many realize that the conflict goes back so many years and can be traced to those two brothers...so does the whole of terrorism have its roots there? Really insightful and well written! |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 09/08/04 at 12:46 PM Excellent rhyming! Keen observation on generational sins! |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 09/09/04 at 03:25 AM Well done, well said Mike...Charlie |
| Posted by Melissa Arel on 09/12/04 at 02:22 AM Excellent biblical references and emotion.. You have a wonderful way of connecting the past & present.. :) Nice work! |
| Posted by Mara Meade on 10/08/06 at 02:18 AM I re-read this poem again today because I've found this subject being revisited, as it may always be through the ages, in more detail these days than the past few years.
Indeed... Ishmael called Isaac "brother." |
| Posted by A. Paige White on 01/04/08 at 12:16 PM And Cain was Able's brother. So in a way, they're just keeping up a family tradition that goes back to the first generation actually born outside the garden. It is such a sad thing. You wrote it beautifully. Congrats on POTD. |
| Posted by Joe Cramer on 01/04/08 at 04:03 PM Congrats on POTD!!! |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 01/04/08 at 04:35 PM Congratulations on poem of the day Mike...Charlie |
| Posted by George Hoerner on 01/04/08 at 04:40 PM Great POTD Mike! Very well written. I loved this. |
| Posted by Mara Meade on 01/04/08 at 09:14 PM So glad to see this as POTD. |
| Posted by Michelle Angelini on 01/05/08 at 02:18 AM CONGRATULATIONS on POTD Mike. The sadness is that too many of us wonder when all this will end.
~Chelle~ |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 01/05/08 at 05:17 AM A worthy POTD. |
