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Posted by Michelle Angelini on 09/05/04 at 05:33 PM This poem/song is wonderful! I hear the twang of a guitar. I admire someone who can rhyme adeptly, since it's not one of my strong points. One thing I looked for in the fight scene was a little more development of it, but that's JMHO. Good Work! |
Posted by Mara Meade on 09/05/04 at 06:02 PM You don't mess with another man's hat. You just don't. There's some good country wisdom in these here words, Mike. Heh... can I put this to music? |
Posted by Mary Ellen Smith on 09/05/04 at 09:48 PM Big smiles for this! I think maybe that was one of relatives! Maybe even my dad...lol! |
Posted by Charles E Minshall on 09/05/04 at 11:06 PM Mike you are taking over the top ten, great.
I enjoy all of your poems....Charlie |