| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 09/04/04 at 02:45 AM Another goodie...Charlie |
| Posted by Mary Ellen Smith on 09/05/04 at 04:07 PM wow... another great "story"....you have a true gift with the telling... |
| Posted by Lori Johnson on 09/07/04 at 03:31 PM It's like deja vu. LOL
I remember this from before & it wonderful to read again. :)
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| Posted by Kate Demeree on 09/08/04 at 04:56 PM The single word in the last stanza... superb. I think many can relate to this. How deep the cuts go... well written Mike |
| Posted by Mara Meade on 09/28/04 at 02:22 PM Eloquent simplicity... I remember this one and appreciate it all the more since it has been a while since I read it the first time. |