Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Maureen Glaude on 08/31/04 at 12:03 PM oh my lord, you started me to tear with this!
it is so moving, and the turn about at the end,
then the final prayer...this poem portrays so effectively the frailty and worth of life, a young life, and to someone here who's lost a beautiful-souled nephew at l8, it was very real and special. Thanks |
Posted by Jane E Pearce on 09/02/04 at 02:43 AM This so appropriate today. So heart felt and well written. |
Posted by Amanda L Marron on 09/02/04 at 10:52 AM i myself am a sailor, but i have so many friends that probably feel this same way all the time....marines, army, etc. |
Posted by Charles E Minshall on 09/04/04 at 02:54 AM Never truer words than, "War is hell." Well
done Mike. Glad you are aboard...Charlie |
Posted by JD Clay on 09/05/04 at 12:58 AM This one obviously has a personal touch and tugs at my heartsrings as well. Eloquent expression of sentiment and heavy drama, Mike...pe4ce |
Posted by Mara Meade on 09/28/04 at 02:12 PM As with so many of your poems, I'm left speechless after this one. So well described and so... haunting. |
Posted by Genevieve Sturrock on 01/18/07 at 11:57 AM Your rythym just drew me in and kept me there. Writing is flawless and your ability to involve your reader in the story is amazing. Very well done! |