Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Amanda L Marron on 08/31/04 at 12:22 AM ohmigoodness, you need to post more like this! its so riveting. |
Posted by Kate Demeree on 09/02/04 at 05:07 AM Golly Mike, how do you do it? I have read 3 poems of yours and run the gambit of emotions. Each touched me in their own way. This one, this one.... the most. Well Done! |
Posted by Mary Ellen Smith on 09/05/04 at 04:26 PM You sir, are a storyteller! This was wonderful!!! |
Posted by Anne Engelen on 09/05/04 at 06:46 PM This is simply awesome! I applaud thee!!!! |
Posted by Rula Shin on 09/07/04 at 08:32 PM Skillfull storytelling indeed Mike, and what an ending! If only every man and woman would embrace the passion and compassion of this great king, this world would be a beautiful place for sure. |
Posted by Mara Meade on 09/12/04 at 03:23 AM An incredible tale... More! |
Posted by Soulo Jacob Bourgeau on 05/31/05 at 12:32 PM I love anything remotely Arthurian and I'm a survivor of, well, I tried to do what the king did over a woman (see my poem, 'Stuck'). You are a brilliant storyteller, Mike! |
Posted by Genevieve Sturrock on 01/28/07 at 04:53 AM this popped up as a Random Reader Favorite...going on my list. great read! |
Posted by Joan Serratelli on 03/20/09 at 04:06 PM Absuluely fAntastic story |
Posted by Joan Serratelli on 03/20/09 at 04:08 PM Absolutely fantastic tale- very well written- interesting read= awesome write |
Posted by Clara Mae Gregory on 04/05/10 at 06:09 PM Oh the woes ...this painful poem makes me think of Guinevere.....and sadly, alot more....more than i care to....but it is very well written and shows the depths and many dimensions love manifests itself. |
Posted by Shannon McEwen on 04/05/10 at 06:59 PM ok, i love this. i read it a couple of times and liked it more each time, glad to see this as POD |
Posted by Maria Francesca on 04/06/10 at 12:40 AM strong story, great rhythm, well told! congrats on potd! |