unseen by Richard Trotter Here is the breeze; you stifle a yawn, the faceless response there's not even scorn when my eyes are beacons ablaze in the dawn- inferno escapes you 05/23/2004 Posted on 05/23/2004 Copyright © 2024 Richard Trotter Member Comments on this Poem Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 05/24/04 at 01:20 PM ah, the sadness of feeling invisible... and the rage that blazes as sadness fades... brilliant piece, richard... write it out... and the flame will become a rainbow someday... blessings... Posted by Sarah Graves on 05/25/04 at 08:38 PM This is a very somber peice; I can almost see the emotion behind every word thats written. Very effective Richard. Posted by Ginette T Belle on 05/26/04 at 02:33 PM my goodness *hand to chest* that is simply beautiful... Posted by Karl Waldbauer on 05/27/04 at 06:48 AM You kindled old memories of love faded into ennui. Powerful stuff, Richard. Return to the Previous Page   pathetic.org Version 7.3.2 May 2004 Terms and Conditions of Use 0 member(s) and 2 visitor(s) online All works Copyright © 2024 their respective authors. Page Generated In 0 Second(s)