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dinghy (lune)

by Leslie Ann Eisenberg

lonely ropes bind
raft on a gray dock
rollicking in ripples

03/26/2004

Posted on 03/26/2004
Copyright © 2024 Leslie Ann Eisenberg

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Kara Hayostek on 03/27/04 at 12:24 AM

Reminds me of VC Andrews or one of those authors with all the swamp stories. Thanks for the read :-)

Posted by Jolie Jordan on 03/29/04 at 12:28 PM

I agree with Chad, very serene, thats what I got from it too. also, the fact that you used 'lonely'... really nice.

Posted by Anne Engelen on 03/29/04 at 12:32 PM

I love compact poetry. This one is wonderful. Put's one right in the scene.

Posted by Ashok Sharda on 03/29/04 at 01:38 PM

The external is capable of causing the ripples.The Scene speaks in no uncertain language.Beautiful image and subtle.

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