lonely ropes bind raft on a gray dock rollicking in ripples
03/26/2004
Reminds me of VC Andrews or one of those authors with all the swamp stories. Thanks for the read :-)
I agree with Chad, very serene, thats what I got from it too. also, the fact that you used 'lonely'... really nice.
I love compact poetry. This one is wonderful. Put's one right in the scene.
The external is capable of causing the ripples.The Scene speaks in no uncertain language.Beautiful image and subtle.