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your cryptic mind
by Michele Schottelkorbso, go ahead
hide from the world
escape from that which you must face
yeah, its easy
easier to pretend
that reality is a measure of conformity
defy society
give it your best shot
let no one in and only phrases out
i see you
see through your cryptic mind
i like what i see
why dont you? 03/21/2004 Author's Note: inspired...
Posted on 03/22/2004
Copyright © 2024 Michele Schottelkorb
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 03/22/04 at 03:36 AM Hahahaha You are trying to provoke a mind to come forward with what you think is whatis. I hope you succeed. In any case, you have suceeded in this poetic verbalization. |
| Posted by Richard Trotter on 03/22/04 at 10:08 AM this really speaks to me.. well done. |
| Posted by Quinlan L Gibson on 03/22/04 at 10:11 PM very nice platform of beauty vs. beast... |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 03/23/04 at 02:04 PM Reads like a mild lesson in tough love without being too condenscending. Thought provoking as usual gal. |
| Posted by JD Clay on 03/26/04 at 01:53 PM This raises the question; does the mind control us or do we control our minds? I love the affirmation to close this/your magnificent revelation, Michele.
Pe4ce.. |
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