by Michele Schottelkorb
this is too much
(I try, I try)
weve come to an area
(an area: void)
where more is required
Posted on 02/04/2004
Copyright © 2020 Michele Schottelkorb
|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 02/04/04 at 12:31 PM|
this resonates so in my soul Michele and asks the question what is left to give after we have given our all. Giving our all, in a world where it seems, never to be quite enough.
|Posted by Ashok Sharda on 02/04/04 at 02:27 PM|
A state of helplessness presented in a beautiful poetic fashion. Will this hope take its toll and shatter love and faith?
|Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 02/04/04 at 02:44 PM|
I really life the style and brevity of this; definitely one for the 'less is more' file.
|Posted by Melina Raven Maness Diebold on 11/29/04 at 05:57 PM|
Very unique and well-written. I love the form.