| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Agnes Eva on 01/27/04 at 11:08 PM a senryu still has to have a single moment that's focused on, like in haiku, and not be a philosophical generalization. it's a pretty short poem, though. for senryu, pick ONE of those 'timeless memories' to give the reader an implied sense of wonder |
| Posted by Maureen Glaude on 01/28/04 at 01:08 AM I particularly like the last line. Interesting concept. |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 01/28/04 at 06:58 AM A rainbow of memories? Good one Annie....Charlie |
| Posted by Kate Demeree on 01/28/04 at 07:14 AM It is a beautiful rainbow of memories shinning in a sky much in need of them. Thank you for sharing this with us... and brightening our skies. |
| Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 01/28/04 at 04:46 PM The last line rolls off the tongue beautifully! |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 01/28/04 at 10:30 PM Those memories can be so vibrant that they help draw attention away from those that are dark. Beautifully crafted! |
| Posted by David R Spellman on 01/29/04 at 04:44 AM An excellent reminder to us all to be thankful for those precious moments... well captured in this for sure. |
| Posted by Mara Meade on 01/29/04 at 03:29 PM Ah, the ability to see what the sun can give us after a storm... when we need our "colours" the most. |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 01/29/04 at 04:08 PM Yes, those moments always registers timeless momories, beautiful associations, capable of providing positive charge. |
| Posted by Rommel Cruz on 12/16/05 at 03:07 AM A rainbow of memories with the leprechaun at the end bearing one's wonderful and colorful history! Oh wait, can I have the leprechaun? (as usual my comments dont make sense LOL) |
