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A Rainbow of Memories

by Anne Engelen

Timeless memories
of life's most precious moments
coulour my hist'ry

01/27/2004

Author's Note: thank you Charlie!!

Posted on 01/27/2004
Copyright © 2021 Anne Engelen

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Agnes Eva on 01/27/04 at 11:08 PM

a senryu still has to have a single moment that's focused on, like in haiku, and not be a philosophical generalization. it's a pretty short poem, though. for senryu, pick ONE of those 'timeless memories' to give the reader an implied sense of wonder

Posted by Maureen Glaude on 01/28/04 at 01:08 AM

I particularly like the last line. Interesting concept.

Posted by Charles E Minshall on 01/28/04 at 06:58 AM

A rainbow of memories? Good one Annie....Charlie

Posted by Kate Demeree on 01/28/04 at 07:14 AM

It is a beautiful rainbow of memories shinning in a sky much in need of them. Thank you for sharing this with us... and brightening our skies.

Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 01/28/04 at 04:46 PM

The last line rolls off the tongue beautifully!

Posted by Max Bouillet on 01/28/04 at 10:30 PM

Those memories can be so vibrant that they help draw attention away from those that are dark. Beautifully crafted!

Posted by David R Spellman on 01/29/04 at 04:44 AM

An excellent reminder to us all to be thankful for those precious moments... well captured in this for sure.

Posted by Mara Meade on 01/29/04 at 03:29 PM

Ah, the ability to see what the sun can give us after a storm... when we need our "colours" the most.

Posted by Ashok Sharda on 01/29/04 at 04:08 PM

Yes, those moments always registers timeless momories, beautiful associations, capable of providing positive charge.

Posted by Rommel Cruz on 12/16/05 at 03:07 AM

A rainbow of memories with the leprechaun at the end bearing one's wonderful and colorful history! Oh wait, can I have the leprechaun? (as usual my comments dont make sense LOL)

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