|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Agnes Eva on 01/27/04 at 11:08 PM|
a senryu still has to have a single moment that's focused on, like in haiku, and not be a philosophical generalization. it's a pretty short poem, though. for senryu, pick ONE of those 'timeless memories' to give the reader an implied sense of wonder
|Posted by Maureen Glaude on 01/28/04 at 01:08 AM|
I particularly like the last line. Interesting concept.
|Posted by Charles E Minshall on 01/28/04 at 06:58 AM|
A rainbow of memories? Good one Annie....Charlie
|Posted by Kate Demeree on 01/28/04 at 07:14 AM|
It is a beautiful rainbow of memories shinning in a sky much in need of them. Thank you for sharing this with us... and brightening our skies.
|Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 01/28/04 at 04:46 PM|
The last line rolls off the tongue beautifully!
|Posted by Max Bouillet on 01/28/04 at 10:30 PM|
Those memories can be so vibrant that they help draw attention away from those that are dark. Beautifully crafted!
|Posted by David R Spellman on 01/29/04 at 04:44 AM|
An excellent reminder to us all to be thankful for those precious moments... well captured in this for sure.
|Posted by Mara Meade on 01/29/04 at 03:29 PM|
Ah, the ability to see what the sun can give us after a storm... when we need our "colours" the most.
|Posted by Ashok Sharda on 01/29/04 at 04:08 PM|
Yes, those moments always registers timeless momories, beautiful associations, capable of providing positive charge.
|Posted by Rommel Cruz on 12/16/05 at 03:07 AM|
A rainbow of memories with the leprechaun at the end bearing one's wonderful and colorful history! Oh wait, can I have the leprechaun? (as usual my comments dont make sense LOL)