pathetic.org :: View From a Treehouse by Leslie Ann Eisenberg

View From a Treehouse

On fingertip wings

I fly

Flitting so fast

I am but a blink

Upside down

Ambling on air

11/08/2003

Posted on 11/14/2003
Copyright © 2024 Leslie Ann Eisenberg

Member Comments on this Poem

Posted by Max Bouillet on 11/14/03 at 04:23 PM

There is a lot of motion and beautiful imagery for so few words! Great verse that is a truly enjoyable read!

Posted by Don Coffman on 11/18/03 at 04:14 AM

Brief, but very expressive. A moment of experience speeding by.

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 11/18/03 at 04:35 AM

Exciting catchy arrangement of words!

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