{ pathetic.org }

Audrey's Poems (3 year old analysis of Life)

by Michele Schottelkorb

little lady named Audrey
a girl named Michele with her
and Rob was there
and my bicycle was ruined
and I cried
blessings in poems
a beautiful lady
named Audrey Jean Marie
she has beautiful eyes ~ her mouth
she has beautiful flowers in her yard
I love you mommy
you have a beautiful dress
your eyes are as pretty as the sky
all the flowers are beautiful
you love me, mommy
whenever we go to summer's, I love you
I care about you
I care about you mommy
beautiful skies in the air
raindrops everywhere
skies are beautiful
and so is the grass
and kitties are nice
and Summer's beautiful
and everything that comes in
something that's a car
if it was mistaken
that nobody was here
and they died
beautiful eyes
pink dresses
and a game of fetch of ball
beautiful roses in her front yard
the smells of roses
and white snow
and today it's summer
and every morning I ride my bicycle
beautiful child
my mother takes me to summer's house
and I take my ball and play with summer
my hair is pink
beautiful sky is blue
I blow the bubbles everyday
and that's all
the end


Author's Note: my three year old daughter has been "writing" poems with me... these are straight from her mouth, to my ears to paper... we have been doing this for about a month... what wondrous creatures our children are!

Posted on 09/30/2003
Copyright © 2020 Michele Schottelkorb

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 09/30/03 at 04:49 PM

WOW! Adds new meaning to the expression "out of the mouths of babes."

Posted by Max Bouillet on 10/01/03 at 10:50 PM

That is precious! This is a great idea that I hope to see more of! Great job.

Return to the Previous Page

pathetic.org Version 7.3.2 May 2004 Terms and Conditions of Use 0 member(s) and 2 visitor(s) online
All works Copyright © 2020 their respective authors. Page Generated In 0 Second(s)