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bombardment

by Kalikala Smith

we walk in bombardment
these meteorites collecting on our shirts

05/13/2003

Posted on 05/13/2003
Copyright © 2024 Kalikala Smith

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Christel Crews on 09/14/03 at 03:06 AM

short, sweet, to the point :)

Posted by Jason Wardell on 01/07/04 at 08:43 PM

*facepalm* so that's why I thought of that word... heh. Anywho, I love stuff like this... just a snippet of a thought. A lovely capture. :)

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 04/28/04 at 12:05 PM

Yes, a cool short poem that leaves plenty to the imagination. Thanks also for your support on my Spring Haiku.

Posted by Stephanie Kent on 08/13/04 at 03:51 PM

Very clever...this says so much in so few words, and that's what makes it stunning.

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