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Storm

by Cole Miller

If I was a dark sky
You’d be my lightening
If I was a heavy cloud
You’d be my raindrops
If I was a thunder clap
You’d be my echo

We’re a storm you and me
And that’s the beauty of it all
One without the other is
Just another cloud in the sky
But together we make
The sky light up
The rains fall
And the earth shake

04/14/2003

Posted on 04/14/2003
Copyright © 2024 Cole Miller

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Agnes Eva on 04/14/03 at 09:15 PM

great metaphor for what must be a multifaceted & passionate relationship :)

Posted by Andrew S Adams on 04/14/03 at 10:09 PM

yay! welcome to pathetic, whomever you are... i really like this one!

Posted by Kara Hayostek on 04/15/03 at 03:38 AM

WoW, impressive poem, i love the metaphor...and im glad to see the earthshakin' for somebody!

Posted by Kalikala Smith on 04/15/03 at 03:58 PM

wonderful:)

Posted by Vimal Rony on 04/19/03 at 05:54 AM

Good poem ,great metaphors.

Posted by Quinlan L Gibson on 04/20/03 at 01:51 AM

Said like a true, passionate, rock-the-earth thunderstorm. I love it.

Posted by Charles J Hannan on 06/19/03 at 04:11 AM

This is powerful good! Nice job Nicole!..congrats on POTD.

Posted by Vimal Rony on 06/19/03 at 04:49 AM

Congrats.Such a lovely poem.Well deserved POTD.

Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 06/19/03 at 12:54 PM

Great, graphic analogy. Just wondering if the relationship is as stormy! *winks* Congratulations on POTD!

Posted by Dana E Brossard on 06/19/03 at 03:16 PM

Very nice. A wonderfull read =)

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 06/19/03 at 04:07 PM

Nice way of looking at love. Congrats on POTD!

Posted by Karl Waldbauer on 06/19/03 at 05:45 PM

Beautiful metaphor! Reminds me I'm way past due for some "stormy weather"!

Posted by Cymbre Dolphay on 06/20/03 at 01:59 AM

So lovely. Storms are the ultimate weather, forget sunshine, it's overrated:)

Posted by D. Xavier Bari on 08/20/03 at 04:29 AM

yeah. something like that.

Posted by Shy Leigh on 11/12/03 at 05:01 AM

Wow. Amazing. Beautiful. Thanks for the wonderful read. --Shy

Posted by Ashley Beaudoin on 01/08/04 at 03:49 AM

I don't think I can say anything different from what has already been said above, its a wonderful piece, nicely done!

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